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PTP: Loss of a Loved One by ~The-Raker:iconThe-Raker:



Pass the Poem: Loss of a loved one

Your face still fills my vision when I close my eyes
and I remember July's gentle rain on white wicker.
I yearn for the candle-lit nights of embracing love
And I miss the unforgettable fire in your eyes
the memory of your smile stains my heart with a color I can't describe
midnight blue my thoughts run in circles, with star dropped diamond tears

My heart cannot comprehend this feeling of desolation
as teardrops patter through the broken window of my heart

My eyes cannot abandon the sights of you suffering-fading away
I'm lonely and everywhere I hear the sky screaming your name
A stray breeze carries your scent and a stranger wears your face.
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Author's Comments

=VertigoArt's third installment of Pass the Poem. The last line is my contribution. The previous contributors are listed below:

1. =VertigoArt :bulletred:
2. =bekkia :bulletred:
3. ~Carmi-A :bulletred:
4. =Vindicta38 :bulletred:
5. =kersee9 :bulletred:
6. =Wombat-Pentagram :bulletred:
7. =CaronCecilia :bulletred:
8. =TheLeavesOfMemory :bulletred:
9. *Permanent-Insanity :bulletred:
10. ~Xx-LoStLiNk-xX :bulletred:

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